Position:Home>Poetry> Yahweh the Lord of my calling; Care to comment?

Lord, I press against the flesh SAUCY
Moments of pleasure that steals joy SHOULD BE STEAL NOT STEALS
Searching, I find wer'e not worthy SHOULD BE WE'RE
I plead you won’t destroy OK

Am I searching or are you leading!? OK
Your word was that my calling!? OK
I empty my sins with wailing MAYBE REPHRASE
Led me to those still waters OK

That cleansed me OK
Healed me OK
Changed me OK
Transformed my life OK

Searching for, The Lord Jesus Christ OK
All my wounds, you bath with light SHOULD BE BATHE
Yet, still I find I’m enticed OK
Eating crumbs, from the table of my birthright OK

How shall I then pray!? SHOULD BE HOW THEN SHALL I PRAY!?
When you showed me the wretchedness of self OK
In the midst my soul cries, Yahweh! OK

yes i enjoyed this it's good for a first draft thanx for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com

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We need to put on our clothes!. He clothes Himself with light as a garment!. We need to put on that anointing!. We all have sinned and come short of His glory!. Great poem very uplifting!. Jesus was uplifted (on the cross) so we wouldn't be dragged under to Hell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Great poem! Loved it!.!.!.'all my wounds, you bath with light' gorgeous line!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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That's quite good!

It shows God's compassion & mercy without knocking us in the head with extreme guilt!.

Good job! It's nice to read a religious poem that doesn't preach!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Blessings Be and AmenWww@QuestionHome@Com

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All I can say to this is AMEN!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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a verry nice piece of poetry!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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