What do you guys think of my poem!? I just kind of wrote this before I fell asleep and I don't know what to do editing wise (I'm a terrible editor) and so yeah!.!.!.and I am 13 so umm!. also, as previously said this is a christian poem if that isn't clear enough!. So anything to edit it and opinions!.!.!.
Your beautiful soul is cracked and dark
You scream in pain and sorrow
You hate it all
You want to die
But all is well my child
For I am here
You kick and scream to defy
You slash and bleed
While you cry
You must escape from those stares
And you hide away in your place
But all is well my child
For I am here
I guide you through the thorns
You weep in joy and in guilt
You think my love will fade
Rid your fear my child
For I am hereWww@QuestionHome@Com