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Question: A Poem I Wrote About Memories Of My Mum Who Died 7 Weeks Ago!.!. just little things that remind me of her!?
When i close my eyes
Im thinking of you
You enter my mind
And the memories flood through
Slight of build
Soft blow away hair
20 silk cut purple
Sitting in the kitchen on your chair
Phone on the table
Club orange in a glass
Handbag in front of you
These memories dont pass
Sitting & waiting
For a visit or call
How you filled up our lives
For someone so small
On passing you by
You'd throw me a smile
I'd sit down opposite
With you for a while
You talk of your day
And where you have been
Of a nurse or a doctor
That you had seen
Yet you never forget
To ask about me
Of how i am feeling
And my family
Dont realize what you have
'Till its lost or gone
But in my heart & my mind
You will always live on
My mum died 7 weeks ago yesterday from lung cancer, this is a poem i wrote with little things in it that always remind us of her!.She always sat in the kitchen with her cigarettes and a glass of orange with her phone in front of her as she loved to phone us all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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That was a lovely read-thank you!. I'm sorry to hear you lost your mum!. Mine also died from lung cancer!. She liked a cigarette too!.
The nurses who looked after her at Wythenshawe hospital in Manchester were wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats an amazing poem, it kinda brought me to tears (im really emotional) it is really good you should be proud, i am really sorry what happpende to your mom but i hope writing that poem helped you "vent" meaning get rid of all the bad and depressing of her and just keep all the happy and good of her,Www@QuestionHome@Com
A very, very sweet poem and a lovely tribute to someone who left a wonderful imprint on your life! I lost my mum too!.!.!.many years ago when I was 22!. They may be gone, but they will never be forgotten! Keep writing! It keeps them alive in our hearts and minds! You have a talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm so sorry for your loss, your poem is a lovely memorial to your Mum!. If it's any comfort the pain of losing your Mum diminishes eventually to a level of pain you can live with, it takes time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Bless you Sean!. Your poem for your mother is lovely!. Just everyday, but obviously precious, and unique, memories for you!. Your mum would be very proud of you!. Courage and big hugs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's a lovely poem and shows your mother's influence on you which will always be with you!. Very nice tribute which she would have loved and that should comfort you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i just finished watching a movie that made me cry and i read your poem and i wanted to cry some more! such a good poem!. im so sorry about your mom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is very good, im very sorry about your mom, lifes sometimes not fair!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am sorry for your loss, the poem is apt I feel!. Maith an buachaill!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.People like Ascoile are few and far between on here thankfully!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is beautiful!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!. That was beautiful!. All I can say is,may God bless you and keep you strong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is really good keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com
So beautiful and sad!.
A very moving poem!.
I am very sorry about the loss of your lovely Mum!.
xxWww@QuestionHome@Com
She obviously mean't a lot to you, and she knew that!. Please except my condolence's here to a good mum!Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats so sad and sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your poem is very deep!. Thanks for sharing it with us :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
ohhh I love it! Sorry about your Mum!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i liteally want to cry!. that is so sweet and im sure your mom would be very proudWww@QuestionHome@Com
Straight from the heart and thats what counts your mom would love it!.
My sorrows and prayers for your loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is lovely - so sorry for your lossWww@QuestionHome@Com
thanks for what you said and wrote
its good lesson for people who have their mothers alive ,,if we all know that life is such short journey we would try our bests to behave the best we canWww@QuestionHome@Com
You've captured your emotion, and you've expressed it in the form of beauty!. Amazing job!.
Poems don't have to have a certain rhythm, rhyme, big words, or a profound meaning!. Sometimes, these little memories piece together what we feel!. Great job once again!. You've truly expressed yourself and your love for your dear one!.
I respect your strength for having gone through such tough times!. Good luck and keep writing!.
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I lost my mum a few years ago and your poem brought tears to my eyes!. It's a lovely poem and i could just imagine her as you describe her so well!. I'm so sorry for your loss as i know that a mother's unconditional love is irreplacable!. You can only match that love when you become a parent yourself and love your children in the same way!. I hope the poetry gives you strength to cope with your loss!. Take care and God bless you and your family!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
All very touching, but how many times are you going to post these!.
This is Yahoo answers and I don't see any question here at all
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