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Earth and Air
by Dag Drahmr
A man of two worlds,
!.!.!.!.earth and air!.
Reality,
!.!.!.!.his anchored soul doth cry,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.from dirt and concret!.
Upon the world's face
!.!.!.!.his body crawls,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.ne'er to break the leash!.
"Free! Free!" his cry!.
Fear now,
!.!.!.!.a distant memory!.
His spirit soars,
!.!.!.!.with eagles on high!.
Below his outstretched wings
!.!.!.!.white fluffy clouds race by!.
Air sweet to his tongue,
!.!.!.!.wind whip his face in heady ecstasy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This brings to mind when I have flying dreams at night!. All my problems are left behind, and I soar and loop in the sky!. It is a wonderful, freeing feeling!. Your poem captures my dream!. I enjoyed this poem very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This poem is beautiful and full of meaning! You did an incredible job! Congratulations!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it
Very!.!.!.VERY beutiful poem!
The Rhyme scheme and meter are positivley amazing!.!.
Good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com