Critiqe my poem?

Question: Critiqe my poem!?

I have this state of greed
And selfless angels when I sleep
I contradict my deed
By turning tables far from these
Well all the love from me
Gets twisted into shapes I breathe
Good taste in sanity
Can never fit the words I scream

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I really wish this had a sense of continuity of some sort!. I read it and I feel like you said something you found witty, and just put them together and called it a poem!. Now, don't get me wrong, you have some good lines in there, but I can't comprehend it as a collective whole!.
But, I do think, this could be something you, yourself understand, so I'll take it for what it is!. Just next time, keep in mind your audience!. It's nice to write for yourself, but if you're presenting something, I'd like to understand your thoughts too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Keep writing and soon you shall see that what you write is true and can only come from the and their sanityWww@QuestionHome@Com