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Question: What do you think!?,should I send the poem to my mother!?
What I hear
What I hear in music,
is the beats in my beating heart,
when you would beat me!.
What I hear in my heart,
is crying because of my fears of you!.
What I hear in my fears,
is just more silent tears from what you do!.
What I hear in my silent tears,
is you yelling at me,
"Mommy can't you see that your hurting me!?"
What I hear in you yelling at me,
is the hatred,and how much you hate!.
What I hear in you hating me,
is something main,and its called pain!.
What I hear in pain is hurt,
hurt always makes me feel like dirt and full of shame!.
What I hear in my shame&blame,
is me praying in Jesus's name,
For mommy to stop hurting me,
and playing her game in side my head!.
what I hear inside of my head,
is mommy wouldn't care if I were dead!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
In a word, No!. My heart goes out to you if you are feeling such pain, but sending this to your Mum surprisingly won't ease it!. Instead, I think you could well have regrets after!.
Have you tried talking to your Mum and telling her what you feel!? Without knowing your situation, it is very hard for anyone of us to comment, but I'm sure we all would like to be able to help!. If you don't feel you can talk to your Mum do you have a trusted relative, an Aunt or an older sister or cousin that you feel comfortable with!? If not, why not see if you can talk to your school counsellor, your pastor or even someone from somewhere like Lifeline!.
Come back to us and tell us how you go!. I will put your question on my watchlist!.
God BlessWww@QuestionHome@Com
Aha dear!.!.!.Are you upset with your mom!? That's not it!. I think you should not send this poem to your mom is all she does is out of over concern for you!. And if she's killing you and you want her to know how things are bad in your mind about her and how she makes it more provocative then send it!. Take care!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it sounds like your mother is!.!.!.a maniac so i think you should contact the police seriously you can end up seriously injured, if you want to live a happy life, i think your mom is not going to help!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ifshe did yes send it to the ******Www@QuestionHome@Com