What do you think of this poetry?

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How long have I awaited you!?
It snowed when I bid you farewell
The wind brushed us apart
I clung to your fragrance until past the winter’s heart
Look it rained stars and, I crush them as I walk down to the altar of sun
My footsteps falter as I dare to smear the glitter of dew
How long have I awaited you!?

Remind me of those sweet, rare moments
And my lips absently curve into a smile
At night I cry the image forms of you running a mile to greet me
I twist and question the returned spring birds of our bond!.
How long have I awaited you!?
My tears stroll down my hot cheeks leaving a tingling earn of cool
To long have I awaited you!?

Do you think its good enough!? can you analyze it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Firstly, good enough for what!. and i think its really good!. It sounds like a love poem (definitley) and i think that you have a really good future if you did do this as a hobby or even job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!. its very abstract and makes u think, but it also sums up so many emotions in one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like your trying to make sense of a bunch of thrown together wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com