A poem called TRAJEDY that i would be honored if you read, rated, or commented o

Question: A poem called TRAJEDY that i would be honored if you read, rated, or commented on!?

true trajedy is
when you try
for so long
to maintain
that hideous stereotype
of beauty,
you forget the art
of mirth!.
after all,
laugh lines
are not attractive!.

comments, criticsm, anything!. people are in particularly viscious mood this morning, so cut me down!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's hard to enjoy tragedy!.!.!. but, it reminds us of what happiness is around for!.

Some people don't truly understand poetry!.
I think that laugh lines can be attractive!.

I'm glad to have read your poem, thoughtful!.
By the way, the words seem more sweet than bitter, to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Solid piece of work!. I love your free style, and the words are bitter but still your voice shines through!. Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its okWww@QuestionHome@Com

Kool! What`s your pen name!? A J Helmutt!?Www@QuestionHome@Com