Care to write a freestyle poem (style of your choice) the theme:
"When the last petal falls"
This is just a fun exercise!. Thank you!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> Freestyle Challenge...for writers only?Question: Freestyle Challenge!.!.!.for writers only!? Care to write a freestyle poem (style of your choice) the theme:
"When the last petal falls" This is just a fun exercise!. Thank you!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: When the last petal falls I see The ending of a partnership Memories of a heart-felt kiss With empty thoughts of what could be When the last petal falls I hear A ringing that is only stress The silence that is loneliness The emptiness of you not here When the last petal falls I feel Your presence, I mean lack thereof This pain, this hurt, which I call love A wound that seems to never healWww@QuestionHome@Com When the Last Petal Falls When the last petal falls, Will you still be there!? When they are but empty halls, Cold, stripped and bare!? Will you stay when I have told you, All that I have done!? Will you know just what to do!? Or will you turn and run!? I need to know that you will stay, Through all the highs and lows!. You are the one, I hope and pray, For my life is drawing to a close!. If you think you can't commit, Don't even bother to stick around, For I live in and love this desolate pit, Where hatred and lies abound!. I really like that idea for a poem!. I couldn't think of a title, so I'll just use the idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i want to make the title "when the last petal falls" as well, i rly like it!.!. Where will we be when the last war is fought!? What will we do when love is no longer sought!? Where will we be when nothing matters at all!? What will we do when the last petal falls!? I just think it's kind of a question we shouuld ask ourselves about whether or not we really are being the change we want to see in the world, not just sitting watching the petals fall, watching the days pass by like sand thru an hourglass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The light is bright everything is out of sight I feel like i have no might I am never right I can't get a trip Can't get a grip on Life Someday I'll be a good wife, but for now heart split by a knife!. If I had one wish i will be to make everything right in spite things going wrong speaking out of tongue if a song was sung from my mouth then I would have found these words of Life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com When the last petal falls I will have emerged From the outhouse Waiting in earnest For the toilet paper That will finally have arrived By the light of the full moon Why had not you come soon With my toilet paper!? A leaf would have sufficed But you lumbered on Looking for a soft luxury I could have done without You have injured me Take back your toilet paper I will not compromise my pride!Www@QuestionHome@Com He has lost the last battle Gone all that I once loved For he was the last petalWww@QuestionHome@Com |