A poem of life, what do you think?

Question: A poem of life, what do you think!?

Age
By Dag Drahmr

Face a slowly changing sky
!.!.!.dark blue to pale then yellow
!.!.!.!.!.!.orange follows before Sol shows his face!.
Why can't I sleep!?
The question runs thro' my mind,
!.!.!.like a train thro' a tunnel!.
Thoughts of life churn within
!.!.!.as future vision dims!.
In the window I see
!.!.!.reflections of age!.
The future holds little promise!.
The past holds little love!.
So,
!.!.!.it's here and now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Amen!. What is life but day to day living and - sometimes the effort - to see something positive in your chores of the day!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it is a sad poem!. Ever the optimist, I count on the future holding promise!. But, your statement is strong and produced a very good poem!. I also agree with the importance of the here and now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Melancholy!. Ruminations on life while sleep deprived will rarely be joyous!. May I suggest ambiem or whatever sleep inducing potion is currently being pedaled by the drug industry!. The poem though, keep, as it was nicely penned! Now get ye to sleep!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Join the Insomniacs Club!. We are many!. Good description of why the poet is sleepless; especially "In the window I see/!.!.!.reflections of age!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good, please have a look at mine:
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