A poem without a name, Comments please?

Question: A poem without a name, Comments please!?

On days long gone
when I was young,
I knew a woman old,
who spoke of wisdom
she joyed to pass along!.

As if she kept a secret
behind her wrinkled grin!.
She spoke,
Youth has ever been
in love with love!.

When you,
decide to marry
wed a man
who loves you more,
Why is that so,

Her face took on a beauty,
her eyes a glowing glint,
You'll find,
Love is a buried treasure
returned in double fold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Be careful, you will date yourself with this type thinking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that your there, but your not!. I can feel it, your talented but just work on the flow of it!. Poems are supposed to flow and when you read it out loud it sounds sort of weird because it doesn't flow!. Like the last paragraph, the you'll find part is just too short along with the other ones!. But other than that i can feel it when i'm reading your poem, you have definite talent!. Your so awesome at capturing someones attention!. I loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a deep poem It tells about the wonders of love and the things that you do not anticipate!.I would title it:The mystery of Love"
All the best!.
Excellent effort continue onwards with your creativity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kind of romantic poem!. OK

Love is a buried treasure

Lady and the love!.

Nostalgic love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the beauty of love,
the secreat of love!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, well, you did an excellent poem! Congratulations on the poem and the message!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Grandmas also know the miracle of true love!
Wonderful message here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the message! This one made me smile!.!.!.I will have to read it to my husband :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

liked theme
a little mixed up
try improving itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Jenny, Jenny!.!.!.got one in here didn't you! Well said!. First and last stanzas stand well! I am smiling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh its very nice :) if u r gonna give it a title dont let it be too straight forwardWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com