I can buy a present or give this poem I wrote as a gift. Opinions Please?

Question: I can buy a present or give this poem I wrote as a gift!. Opinions Please!?

Your tranquility
Is the anchor
That secures a position
For my restless life

Intrigued by art and wit
I oft pursue attainable beings!.
They cannot fasten me,
I am protected by you!.

Two cusps joined
To create that ephemeral moon
The night we met, and in the dark
You sustained me

What erratic whim of
Which eccentric god
Thought this!?
You keep us
In harmony
Bliss!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

try memorizing it and reciting it to her and then hand her something symbolic!.!.!.

My critique:
your golden pen, it writes with wit
connects ur mind and plays with it

it swims through your memories
through emotions with a WHIZ

it creates a picture
from what it's not
creates a fixture
of a story and a plot

!.!.!.symbolic poem of urs!.!.!.NICE!
p!.s!. i'm a preteenwuldn't know nothin bout this stufWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not great at gift giving, but if you think the person is receptive to a piece of creative effort that is only for him/her, the send the poem!. Buy (or make on your computer) a blank card and print (or type in nice font) the piece!.

But if in doubt, do both!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

if the person is materialistic then you should give something!. if the person is the romantic type then you should give the poem and perhaps some flowers!.!.!. if you are not sure then give both some gift and the poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good, I think handwritten on colored paper would add a nice element!. Maybe black paper and white ink, dunno, just a thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is actually a really good poem
Give a poem, and one red rose with it
It would make anyone's day, and it is romantic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!. Can't you do both!? Give the poem & a gift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com