What are your opinions on my poem?

Question: What are your opinions on my poem!?

Life is simple, Truth is not

This is meager!.
This is weak!.
This is ‘feeling’!.
Forced to leak!.

This is portion!.
This is small!.
This is man-made
Short and tall!.

This is un-real!.
This is fake!.
This is simply
What we make!.

This is human!.
This is you!.
This is me and
This is true!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It needs a title, unless the first line is its title!.!.!.

A lot of repetition, fine with me, but may not be fine with others!.

So I guess this IS simple!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

HEY!!
I LOVE IT !!!!! truley!! i mean u really got some tallent , never stop, and it will get better by time,
just have a title for this poem , then its really great! keep on the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com