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Question: My first free verse poem!. What do you think!?
Honest response especially about display of poem!. as i do not know how to lay out, free verse poems!. and your view of poem itself!. Thx
Tittle: Summer Disco By Tia Metcher
White
Feathered,
Cotton ball,
Softly,
Ballet,
Across sleek
Blue dance floor,
Ocean brine sweeps,
Along golden tiled shore,
(Whoosh, Swish, whoosh)
Dance the tango twist,
Oceans current,
Tambourine,
Is the music Re-mix!? Theme,
Twittering twitter,
Choir birds sing,
Orchestrated by, whistling winds!.
Twittering twitter birds,
Summer song sung,
Thunder and lightning,
Drum beats roll,
(Boom, Crack a de Boom), (Boom, Crack a de Boom),
As lightning displays,
The disco light show,
The highlights of -
The Summer Disco!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think your poem is truly breathtaking, you create a painting in your reader`s head!. Keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com
very nice,,
sounds familiar though!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I LOVE IT!!!! =D When I read it I felt I was inside it imagining the cotton ball going down
down
down
I wish I couls write a free verse like you but I suck at it!!! =[Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW!
u got some cool stuff there!!!
I can REALY imagine thaat!
I would really like to be able to write something like that!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
boooooorrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnggggg!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its sound nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
lovely! a really nice poem!
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I give you ten snaps girlWww@QuestionHome@Com