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Question: Please comment u pretty people!!?
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your entry!.
their quiet sitting and staring
waiting in moments
holding breath
like fragile beasts
as you try to release
the looped dogs
growling
as you stumble
through chains
rusting
to carpet
heels clicking
echoing
across the dead silence
waiting
for the blue men
to come in
with news
better than your own
traumatic condition!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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!.nice one!

what's the title!.!.!.!?
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