Do u like this poem its written by me??

Question: Do u like this poem its written by me!?!?

When I think I could reach so high
the first thing I do think is to touch the sky

Everybody think its the imagination of mine
but I think its my bravery's sign

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think it is a great start to a poem!. It does not need to be long and drawn to be a good poem, only, it needs detail and clarity and it needs to say something to the reader!. You did good on all accounts! What it needs now is cleaning up! When I write a poem, normally in ten to fifteen minutes, I put it aside for a week or so, and then I re-read it and find where it needs tweaking!. I like to think my poems and writings are perfect the from the get-go but, every time I read it again I see how I can make it better, mostly through spelling and grammar! You did great! It says all that you wanted to portray!. Send me another one!. Ciao!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's okay but there are three things:

1!. where is says "the first thing i do think is to touch the sky", i think you should have it "the first thing i think is to touch the sky" i think the 'do' in there messes up the flow!.

2!. you need a middle, it's way too incomplete!.

3!. the last line just doesn't sound right, i think you should take out the 'my' or if you wanna keep that in there then change 'it's' to 'it is'!. idk it's just something with the flow!.

and remember poems don't always have to rhyme!.

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OK
you've got the start
you've got the finish
now all you need is the bit in the middleWww@QuestionHome@Com

it is great! is it about becoming a woman!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, add some more too itWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it did you make it yourself!?Www@QuestionHome@Com