Would you consider this style "The Broken Word"? (5-5-5-5-5-5)?

Question: Would you consider this style "The Broken Word"!? (5-5-5-5-5-5)!?

The sun's hills are hell-
acious but moon
has it's own ridge plan-
etary and warm
with glow holes and cram-
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the second line only has 4 I think!.!.!."cious" is only 1!.!.!.I'll check!.!.!.
yep!

Always

Edit: PERFECTION!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love answering your questions but i dont get it!.!. just a country bumpkin
:)
i do know acious is pronounced shus like in audaciousWww@QuestionHome@Com

No on 'shus'!.
If you're going to go with a new form, do not confuse the reader with!.!.!.uh!.!.!.is 'slang' or phonetics the right word!.!.!.I'll go with unusual phonetics in an otherwise phonetically great poem!.
I is awake!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the broken word is still alive
hangin by the number five
the luminous light reflects night
sparkles from my car under the moon lightWww@QuestionHome@Com

shesus Buk!
They call him the quandarer yeah the quandarer, he quandars round & round & round & round & round!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I will consider it!.

Wow, what an inter-
esting form and verse
to write and intro-
duce to Yahoo bards
who enjoy wonder-
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This is what I call "Free Form"!.!.!.not to be confushed with "Free Verse!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the change to moonlight, really nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Another new form! What marvelous imagery!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are one of the most brilliant poets I've seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is this code for 'beam me up Scottie' !?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am not sure I just like reading your poetry Buk!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i am with always on this oneWww@QuestionHome@Com

good edit

I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm with Regwah on this one!. Round and round!. LMAOWww@QuestionHome@Com