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Question: I'm only 13 and I was wondering if I'm a good Poet!?
Here's my best poem!.!.!.
I love you in ways that words can't express!.
I imagine the your eyes filled with love as you look down into my face and I imagine the warmth of your touch!.
I imagine laying in your arms and feeling safe for the very first time!.
I imagine our first date walking through the park holding hands and being as close to each other as possible!. I imagine dancing in the park by a pond and then we start to get tired!.
I imagine the willow tree we will lay under while I rest my head upon your shoulder as you sing to me with an angelic voice so soothing and lovely that any person would forget to breathe thinking it's impossible you're still on earth!.I imagine our first kiss so pationate and so beautiful that even an angel from heaven could not believe it was real!.
I imagine a love that could be but will never be!. As to you I am as small and weak as page number in a book!. Without me you could loose your place and never find it without having to read it all again and again searching for your place!.
I imagine true Love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your really good! im 13 too and i write stories but that is a really good Poem i cant write poem's, and your amazing at it! :)
your really good,
brittWww@QuestionHome@Com
You would be a better potato!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
doesnt rhyme, but good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's really good!. I am 13 and I can not write a poem if my life depended on it so you have a gift =]]]Www@QuestionHome@Com
I thought for your age your poem was very nice easy reading! The one verse that to me that was out of sinc was the words --and then we start to get tired--- I would take that out maybe instead --tiring the willow tree we lay resting my head---something to that affect!.
I am new at learning poetry myself and you can learn lots here but reading others and you can get ideas how the words flow and the form of poetry, You have a great start! Good Luck!!
Is the title of your poem Love Imagined !Nice title use if you would like!Www@QuestionHome@Com