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Question: Ok, here it is, what do you think of my poem!? Can you guess what it is about!?
The oceans daughter
As her tail slipped soundly through the waves,
I beckoned my legs into the water!.
She was slithering through under water caves,
She was the oceans daughter!.
Algae was stitched up her spine,
Her skin was a marble green!.
Down her tail was a jagged line,
Never again would she be seen!.
As I watched her shadow pass,
Deep within the harbour!.
My eyes were like broken glass,
Her voice was like drooling lava!.
I waited for my realisation to clear,
For her existence to fade die as the waves caught her!.
Yet her presence would always stay near,
For she was the oceans daughter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I must appreciate you!.your power of imagination is very good!.in my views it can be about a MERMAID!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
IDK!.!.!.!.an eel came to my mind!.!.!.lol! jokes!
Good poem by the way!. I love the imagery you used and asking us to guess what its about was a good touch!. It had my imagination going wild!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its a very beautiful poem, is it a mermaid!? if not then oh well=)
But I do really like the poem 10/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats definetely about a mermaid!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
ill guess a mermaid, but thats maybe too obvious =/
if its not that then i have no idea lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
good one
i think a mermaid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!. A mermaid, perhaps!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
well you have nicely played with the words!.let me guess !.!.!.is it about iguana!?!?!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
A dolphin, Whale, Turtle, Mermaid!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.some sort of sea creature!?Www@QuestionHome@Com