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Question: Am I civil enough in this offering!?
Pestilence

Upon this land disease at hand
virulent and vile!.
Hiding low, just biding time,
clocks ticking deep inside!.

What triggers the attack unknown,
but who it attacks is known!.
And as we watch, pestilence flies!.
Pandora just keeps coming!.

Names are many… too many now
soup du jour with a twist!.
New strains morphed yet again
and the results… still the same!.

Humanity attacked all sides now
Devil, God… all names evoked
Dialogue while shouting things!?
Guns are quicker… echoes few

Civility, dying daily, dyingWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Excellent! Well phrased, and (perhaps) entirely too civil!.!.!.but the point is made!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is not a civil city
As a civil city should
To have a civil city
Would be certain-ally good
Decaying and the dying
Of the civil-ally right
Turns a civil-ally day
Into uncivil alley night

Fight the good fight
If you know you are right

Neon You see with civil eyes!.
I appreciate your message and your thoughts!
Civility is on the decline - the off-ramp to Ignorance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that T!.D!. has caught the germ of your ideas!. As for myself, I've always been a fan of blight verse!. While reading this one time just flu by!. All seriousness aside, this is so strange!. Good, but strange!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've been out of the loop today working on our bathroom and bedroom and I come back to check in and this is the first poem I come across!.!.!.and I am so glad I didn't miss it! This is great Neon!.!.!.yes, definitely civil enough!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, you presented civility dying in a civil manner!. Better get innoculated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa!
Man civil!.!.!.woman not civil!.!.!.and the wheel turns round with ice, not fire!.!.!.the bang, not the whimper!
Good say! Give 'um hell, Harry!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are civil to be sure, this is so in depth, with truth spoken!.

Pandora's box has been in mind for years, I wonder if it ever
had a secure latch! Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very contagious!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is civil and very true!. The poem contains worlds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a great poem!. Well done!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

way to cower Neonman!Www@QuestionHome@Com

no!. coz you want to take a lot of precious time from meWww@QuestionHome@Com