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For all the Ex’s

I remember you!.
I remember falling in love with you!.
I remember falling out of love with you!.
I remember hating you!.
And today I just don’t care
The real opposite of love is indifference
And I celebrate my freedom!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Spock of Star Trek said, "the opposite of logic is emotion!." In the same way, the opposite of love can be indifference rather than hatred!. A very interesting victory poem!. Please keep posting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

short, quick to the point, pretty good,
not all x's hate their o's though, take care,?
!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ist ok, heres a guide on youtube on how to make a really good poem! http://ca!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=eBGIQ7Zuui!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Acceptance of what is, is a victory! Nice piece of wisdom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

But I dont rememberWww@QuestionHome@Com

Been in your shoes!. Liked the poem a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! that is very good, i don't consider changing any of it, its beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your poem and the message contained within!.!.!.TDWww@QuestionHome@Com