I just wrote it in response to the question "It's my birthday, write me a poem"
Its very early and not yet revised, do you think i should clean it up and remake/continue with it, or abandon it!?
~Happy Birthday~
I awaken to the sound of buzzing
my alarm screaming to wake up
it dies with a dull thud
I get up
eyes, bloodshot form the night before
burning with the fire of 30 candles
But wheres my cake
i called in sick today
as if they would even notice i was gone
i checked the mail
nothing but bills and hate mail
But wheres my cards
I go to open the fridge
And thats when i find my present
Its lying on the counter on the counter
Its stayed by me my whole life
my last remaining friend
I dig it in to find im bearly living, he always was a sharp one
The blood runs out like silk
flowing like rich icing
i follow it to the floor, the best present yet
There i lie, clutching at my one remaining friend
'Thankyou' i whisper softly
"happy birthday to me!.!.!.
So what are your thoughts, TnxWww@QuestionHome@Com