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Question: Do these two verses from my poem describe all of us!?
Don’t put me on a pedestal
You’ll see my feet are clay
So keep me at eye level,
And all is well today
Don’t expect too much from me,
There’s less than meets the eye,
So shield your eyes and you’ll not see
The chicanery, the deceit, the lieWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Maybe some days we are all like that, but feel for the most part we will help and share where we can, By the way thought your poem was really good, I definitely did like it! Good Job!
Roger don't you mean---But I'm NOT difficult to see! you wrote:
But I'm difficult to see Because there's so much of me!.
Doesn't quite make sense the rest was good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not me!.
There's more than meets the eye;
No pedestal too high--
Your feet are made of clay,
But mine are rock!. They stay!.
If you can connect
You'll get more than you expect,
But I'm difficult to see
Because there's so much of me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
baeutifully accurate!. u have an immense sense of the world today try hide the truth with happy propaganda!.
WELL SOME PEOPLE REALISE!!!!!!
GOOOD JOB!Www@QuestionHome@Com
hmm i guess at times it may seem that way but not all the time!.its really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Maybe at times, but not all of the time or everyday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't know about describing us ALL,maybe a few!.!.!.!.!.but I really like it!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com