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Question: What Do YouThink of This Poem!? Points This Way!!!!!!!!!!!?
My friend is a really nice person but a lot of people don't see her that way!.!.!.!.she wrote this and I was wondering what you might think!. Its called Love Bein' Me:
I wake up in the mornin'
look in the mirror n' I see
what every single person
said I never be!.
Every single day,
I went through all that pain,
never even sure,
I'd live another day!.
I wish I had anohter chance,
to only take a glance,
to look at me and see,
What I could really be!.
When I really knew,
what I could really do,
I knew it was my destiny,
to love bein' me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I really liked it!!
It appears that your freind, despite the pain she went through, is happy to be who she is - which is what we all should be striving for!. Your freind sounds confident - yet not cocky!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
great!!!
Write more!. Get it published
book "The Poets Market" updated each year, probably on Amazon!.com
sinc,
Pub!. PoetWww@QuestionHome@Com
That's a beautiful poem!. I am greatly encouraging you to continue writing so wonderful texts, you've got great inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
well written!. i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its amazing great jobWww@QuestionHome@Com
i love it and i now how it feels!!!!!!!!!!
please tell her to keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com