Any professional opinions on my poem?

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Ok anyone who knows alot about poetry please tell me what you think of my poem!? I just wrote this while wondering around my complex in the middle of the night so yeah!. I am 13 and haven't been writing poetry long so just you know lower ALL expectations including that of my humor!.!.!.it's more random than anything!. Anyway I have been told it's meaning but I'll still let y'all find one ; )

It terrifies me where I am
But it intrigues me when I am
skulking the way it does
It's the monster under my bed
It's the missing page of a book
It’s the little thing I can’t ignore
It’s my minds occupant
It's what keeps me up at night
And what confines me to these bedroom walls
It's that second shadow always by my side

I don't know about the where/when I am part it dosent quite sound right to me!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

*Bursts out of inter-dimensional rift* Sorry, haven't answered in a while, and there's people who might notice, ergo, had to make an excuse!.

Anywho!.!.!.

Your poem!.!.!.!.wait gotta read it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.huh!.!.!. it's a little!.!. all over the place!. It's nice, but it's always better to have a meaning in mind, whether made up, or fake, if you want to write a really good poem!.

And, don't worry, I don't need to lower my expectations for your poem, cause I don't raise them for older people!. I judge poems, not poets!. Your poem is very well done!.

73 out of 100!. Just an opinion, if you don't agree, that's fine!. But, what good is literature without opinion!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I would say that you have the makings of a poet!. The most important thing for you to do next is to read great poetry!. Kipling and Poe speak in ordinary language, try those two!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

A professional opinion!?
!.!.!.That poem is unprofessional!.

My opinion: It's a good poem!.
You might say, it intrigues me!.

I definitely know a lot about having been corrected too many times (and far too rudely) when I've written "alot"!.
As if teachers were too ignorant to understand it!.
I think they are!. (This is the "my opinion" part of my response:)
Those fools probably confuse it with allotment, or something!.

Eye thinc dat onlee fillossiferrs shud bee abel 2 teech ingles!.
& stuf!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

besides my account im truly a 30 year old poet!. and i say for a kid your uterlly fantastic!. bravo and keep it up!. heres a poem for you from me!.

I was leaving the park,
when I heard a dog bark!.
I didn't think anything of it!.
Why would I think anything of it!?
I kept walking towards the car,
it was parked not that far!.
So as I strolled without a care,
out of nowhere,
came the barking dog!.
I dropped to the ground like a log!.
It had a hold of my right leg,
chomping on it like it was a lill wooden peg!.
I screamed in pain!.
Soon my leg would be nothing more than grain!.
I screamed for help!.
Then with a certain lill yelp
I woke up on my couch,
to finding my chichuachua biting me!."OUCH!"Www@QuestionHome@Com