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Question: Is this what I had in mind all along!?
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Who can it be
at my door again…
I walk away
as the bell rings,
and, bending backwards…
here I am now
opening the door
to see if
they
have, to me, changed somehow…
or does their breath still stink
and their foul mouths,
angry that I tricked them the last time…
make a mess of things!.
Don’t get white carpet…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
drifting down, in soft water brown
silken hair soft blown air!.
silver streak fast sound speak!.
tinsel down on to muddied hound!.
heather brown on cold ground
till in ones end quiet sound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

keep my walnuts outta you're mouth, honey tastes good :)

I meant to say, your poem sounds good to me!. ;)

what use is a threat you don't seem very willing to make!?

do you hide all of your threats like that!?

Mind if I suggest!.!.!. "Easily offended baby dragon"

hide your threats like a female dog!.
(to bad censors don't censor threats, you might look like less of a female dog, if they did!)

Get a map of Kazakhstan, because this poem stinks!.
Just kidding (not like Micheal Jackson)Www@QuestionHome@Com

hehhhehehehWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's not your neighbour!. That's for sure!.
Jehovah Witnesses again!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You got me this time!. I haven't a clue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is their a map I could buy!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I got lost somewhere up thereWww@QuestionHome@Com