My poem 'Night Crawler' please read thanks :)..?

Question: My poem 'Night Crawler' please read thanks :)!.!.!?

In silence i walked the night,
among my village the beast crept,
its footprints on winter white,
lofty snow flakes the sky wept!.

Alone in the darkness i stood,
the beast looked upon me -- to dine,
so did my heart sink and would,
not in my favor, this walk of mine!.

The beast its jaws soon to sting,
still my fate lingers, not to end fast,
dribble by dribble -- the snow king,
"Oh!" its riveting body came at last!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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whoa, that poem is good! you shud make more and give one to someone you like or sumthing ,its awsum!.!.!.!.!.!. what were you thinking when you wrote it, if you make another one email meWww@QuestionHome@Com

yeah i like it very much, a kids poem but definately not bad!.!.!. good man!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow that is really good!. You should publish a book of your poems!.!.!.=]]Www@QuestionHome@Com