OK, Miss Happysappy, I wrote you all a love poem. Do you like it?

Question: OK, Miss Happysappy, I wrote you all a love poem!. Do you like it!?

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What about the girl,
will she reply,
will my love flower
or wither
and die

What about my heart,
what if I cry,
how will I stay strong
when dying
inside

Will she see me,
inside the crowd,
will my smile speak out
or will
I frown…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Is this about your neighbor again!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like, `Or will/I frown!.!.!.;' a very P!.G!. Wodehouse style love scene, with the boy unwittingly affecting indifference!.

Assonance for rhymes- such as crowd/frown, or cry/dying/inside, also works with pleasant delicacy in these short lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Who's Miss Happysappy!?
Very interesting!. I don't think it qualifies as happy or sappy!.
It's a little forlorn!. I really like the line "!.!.!.will my love flower or wither and die" great image!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To quote an answer given today by a poster named JBird: "Continue writing poems even if no one reads them!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

How sweet! The romantic resurfaces!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

See, you can do it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am happy and sappy after reading your love poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was good except you went from dying to frowning which i am not liking but it was good otherwise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm certain she'll reply
Before you must die
You stand out in a crowd
For crying out loud !!!!

Very pretty!.!.!.don't cryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Send her this poem and she will notice you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it! Very close to home!.!.!.I'm the one yearning !.!.!.not the guy :( !.!.!.wish it was the other way around!.!.!.ha ha!.!.!.o well!.
Thanks for sharing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.except the last stanza!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Did He die or was He forever sad !?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really DO like it, but next time please don't direct it at me!. People are starting to talk about us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com