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Question: Some sort of writing !?
when i was a willow
i would weep
with tears
that not one
would dry

when i found
my flowers __
when i blossem-ed
every-one would enjoyed
the colors
oh yes !
the colors

i now awate
with un-dried tears!.


gary bechter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I sense a melancholoy look at fleeting beauty!. Your spelling and punctuation are always interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Idk but I like it very muchWww@QuestionHome@Com

It was great ! oh my, found myself feeling sorry for the tree! Could it be they feel the withering away of their flowers!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

niceWww@QuestionHome@Com