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I am the Sparrow guarding my nest, Eyeing the crows, I never rest!. I fly to places where no one can follow, Not the Jaybird, Not the Barn Swallow!. I peck at their eyes I won’t let them sleep, They are the wolves I watch the sheep!. *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I have always thought that you have a big ego!. And lately your writing proves that you deserve to!. Your poetry seems better and better these days!. Or am I just getting used to you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The sparrow can do more good than a sheep dog - I see!. I wonder, what is in it for the sparrow!. Usually, animals do not protect another species unless it is a benefit for themselves!. Could it be - that the sparrow's nest is lined in fleece!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com i think this is exceptionally groovey and innovative!. i love the perspective but wish it was longer!. it almost feels like it's not done!. i want to know more about the narrator and what happens in the future!. if more is added!.!.!.please let me know!. we need more original work like this! thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com I said the sparrow with my bow and arrow I killed cock robin Bravo! a sequel!. I love children's literature!. the metaphors are strong and visual completely dependent on the reader!.!.!.!. and apparently the censors you do not like cool!? Well, you got cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com (",) My beloved sparrows bring me endless happiness!. I charge to my garden I, the Scaremagpie!. They scatter!. The timid blackbird leaps to the birch!. My beloved sparrows merely lift their lovely heads and seem to say!.!.!. Look!.!.!.there's D! What's for lunch!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Fine metaphor for the weak fighting the strong and winning, although eternal vigilance is necessary!. I like the way you developed this concept!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Helicoptors, they land every spring! The squirrels attack with vengeance!. A nice look at something small defending and ever vigilant!. Stanza 2 line 2 seemed one beat long!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This was really cool!. I like this sparrow's tale!. I looked at your question count over 1100 and most of them poems!.!.!.I don't know how you do it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The sparrow does its job successfully!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Delightful! Tis early!.!.!.we have a long way to go!!!! Keep the pace with lightheartedness and we'll all get there with a smile!Www@QuestionHome@Com The sparrows seem fewer around here this year, but I do have a lovely family of robins!. They grow up so fast!Www@QuestionHome@Com Neat study of the birds! What of the wrens!?Www@QuestionHome@Com simple and sweet but i would have thought that you would have said nor instead of not on the last line, stanza 2Www@QuestionHome@Com |