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An Historical Reference by TD Euwaite Orbiting clouds, a gaseous mass, engulfing me in visions past, permeate and ever-last, whirl away as times contrast!. Taffy pulled on Andrew’s X, dizzied, bent, and more perplexed, by Bede and Vercingetorex!. I plead to God to make them stop, so I may taste a single drop, to go where Alexander goes, or hear the tones of Cicero… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A century later , you make your own tones!. They are as clear and as beautiful as those you wish for!. In this world of instantaneous communication and disappearance, poets fight an uphill battle!. What is life worth without a struggle to reach a goal!?Www@QuestionHome@Com culture clash!. In Mexico a weathered old woman passes on the ancient art of beading to her students!. Plastic coke bottles covered in colourful beads glued on to their surfaces in spiritual peyote designs sit on the sidewalk in front of her!. The tourists are enthralled!. I am confused!.!. should I be appalled!? You make the effort seem effortless!Www@QuestionHome@Com Taffy and history!? Wiki'd to catch your references in stanza 2, especially Vercingetorex!. So do you want time or humanity to slow down to allow a deeper appreciation of things!? That's my stab!Www@QuestionHome@Com Great rhythm brother!. Not easy given the content and tonality!. Well done!. Vulgo enim dicitur!.!.!. iucundi acti labores (It's commonly said that accomplished labours are delightful) (Cicero's "De Finibus") D!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very, well written, and very well done, your poetry writting, is better than some!. Great educational prefference, displayed, from poetry wriiten by TD Euwaite!. I Loved it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com The Pendragon, Arthur, and a teeny Saxon!.!.!.plus Alexander in Egypt!. A gourmet recipe this morning! Oh, and that troublemaker Bede!.!.!.he was NOT venerable!.!.!.his kids told him so!.!.!.!.heheheheheheheheeeeeWww@QuestionHome@Com Go where Alexander goes, how brave thou art!Www@QuestionHome@Com History was never my forte!. Thanks for the lesson!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Some of this is elegant, some of it makes no sense to me at all!. It doesn't matter It's all good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |