I'm entering a contest, which poem should i use?

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Question:

1!. Can't imagine
Tears still flow every night when i think about you
My heart is beating softly
I can't imagine anything like this
it's as if it's not real!.
That you are no longer here,
in this world!.
Where did you go!?

2!. The Wind blows
The wind blows and the world is shaken
Houses are destroyed
and lives are taken
how can we learn to live in a world
where death is so common
and every second of our lives
people are commiting sin!?
We can power through it
if we all stand together,
to fight the power of the wind!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I favor the poem The Wind Blows!. It is so timely because a lot of natural disasters have been occurring of late!. I particularly enjoyed the first 5 lines of the poem!. This poem is sure to get an emotional response!.
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My vote is for #2 because the content is at least somewhat original, whereas, #1 is not original at all!. I think every other poem on Y!A is about this very topic and sounds remarkably similar!.

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The second poem is better because it sounds better and is more original!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the 2nd one!. The first is kind of cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com