Please critique this poem - thanks.?

Question: Please critique this poem - thanks!.!?

For I have journeyed to the very core of my soul
And I have witnessed for myself the demons that lurk there
And I assure you they are the most terrifying beings that will ever be known

I tremble in fear as they surround me
And their constant chatter envelopes my mind

I long for solitude, I long for calm
But they are always in me

I retreat to the fetal position and await my demise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Awesome poem!.!.!.!. very definite in your choice of words!. However!.!.!. I hope this is not happening to you or this is how you feel !!!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have a way with words!. I am a therapist and this is what people believe they will find when they do the work!. But they don't find demons or darkness inside, just a little wounded kid looking back at them, waiting for the light!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great poem!!! i think you really spoke your mind and told us what you feel which what its supposed to say!. awesome job!

write on!Www@QuestionHome@Com