Poem anyone?

Question: Poem anyone!?

I sketch her face in my mind
Again and again!.
From memory!.
Her countenance does her well,
But pays me in diamonds!.
I am wealthy in her beauty!.
For her charm must be inherited,
And her smile transcends deficits!.
Yet here she is in my drawing, captured
In a time of abundant beauty!.
By hands that shake in awe of her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You are the man brother !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love is evident here!

Some suggestions to ponder:
L6: "for her beauty makes me wealthy"
L7: inherited!? maybe "and her charm ever presence"
L8: deficits in a love poem!? "any loss erased with her smile"
L10: abundant beauty!? Maybe not the best as to me I would want to imply evermore, eternal, etc!. type of beauty!.

Only suggestions so take them for what they are worth!. It is afterall, your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have you ever heard that song, "don't go changing"!? I think this is one time perhaps you should listen to it!! Sometimes people can see things differently but many times things are best, such as is art the way the artist first, splashes it across the page!. This one is perfect!.!.it was a picture of beauty and and vision of loveliness!. You have talent abounding!! Loved it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The song of a man for the one he loves!. Our minds can always paint a vivid picture, time and time again, no matter how long we may be apart, or spend together!. We need not look at the other to see the face that we hold dear to our hearts!. I like this poem, it speaks volumes about the mind and true love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh Lord, keep you safe, and your family as well,
Diamonds don't buy anything!.!.
God Bless the "J"s
There is no doubt,
That these Ladies rule your heart!!
May God Bless You and Yours today and always!.
Thanks for being YOU, Semp!Www@QuestionHome@Com

But does this beauty,
lie beyond the canvas
or is it merely my creation!.!.!.
a new incarnation
of Narcissus,
have I become!?

Absolutely scintillating poem!. My hands are shaking in awe as I type!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mmmmm, nice!.
The feeling tone reaches me, and I get some of it!.
But the idea is not to "get it", entirely!.
In fact, you confuse me enough so that only the tone is important!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lovely expression of true love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She has to be great for what you write of her!. I have met two women who I felt awe, neither I loved!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She must be madly in love with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She must be something!.!.!.I hope to shake her hand some day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com