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I just wrote this poem!.!.!.and I was wondering if it's any good!. Please be honest!.!.!.!.I'd rather know if it was terrible!. :)

Here I sit;
Alone in my box,
Flying in chains,
Yet flightless I remain!.

Courage took hold of me;
And down they went,
Powder, powder, crushed to a pill;
I lurch and purge,
Breath in that familiar smell!.

My mind curdles and I stop at a beat,
My rhythm will slow,
My mind will go,
My thoughts are hot air,
My body; left in despair!.

What’s left of my mind watches the flow;
The flow of my blood,
And I watch it go;
The warm relaxing trickle spills onto the floor;
It stains the carpet and yet I wish to see more!.

Finally I’m free,
Free from me,
Free from perfection,
Happy; simply to be!.

Thanks!!
:DWww@QuestionHome@Com

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