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(Praying for the safe return of Madeleine McCann) Stealing our angel!? Selfish, vile creature Robbing the world Our future, you plunder God is Love And also anger Kidnap Children!? Tremble, at thunder Made out of love Every one of her freckles Each one, of them A gift from above Lord, must we suffer We want to see her face Grant the wicked an answer Remove, your graceWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think he will be very happy with this one!. (I would remove the comma after "Remove)!. I think this one is clean and to the point with no wasted words!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, your poem is thoughtful, but my response to this is that this poem should be dedicated to all of God's children who have been kidnapped or missing!. What about the children that are tortured, abused, abandoned!? There are so many of God's little ones that are unfortunate, homeless and hungry!.!. What about the one in war stricken countries!? I really think that there is more to the story than meets the eye on this case !.!. Then again only Gods knows!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com There is not a word wasted in this powerful and haunting poem!. There is so much pathos in the heartbreaking words you write that I am deeply affected!. There is also anger and retribution, very appropriately so!. Altogether a wonderful work!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I did hear about the abducted child in Portugal!. So sad her parents had to return home without her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Powerful poem! Send it to Amber Alert!Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I think TD will like both versions!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com What's wrong with people wanting to hurt kids!? Makes me want to do some unChristian stuff to them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |