Critque This Poem Lally, Lally, Lilly and Tilly ?

Question: Critque This Poem Lally, Lally, Lilly and Tilly !?

Lally, Lally, Lilly and Tilly
Sally, Sally, Suzy and Sissy
Money, Money, Sweet and Honey
Nancy Noon Cats and Spoon
Oops, Doops, Crispy Doo
Pam, Pam Eats Fish and Clam
Queen, Queen Nothing But Queen
Run, Run, Swim and have fun
Sally Dings Song Dixie Dong
Tim and Tom Tammy and SammyWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Great!. Is your last name Shakespeare !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

change the name of the poem!. your poem reminds me of a poem by don l!. lee!.
perhaps this poem is about the futility of money n the importance of relations!. 'tim and tom tammy n sammy' reveals it!. in this poem u've justaposed the important n the unimportant!. u've given a sketch of the importnt n relly big things in life!.
maybe the meaningless syllables r names of people n u've described wt these ppl do!.
like yr poem!.
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Crispy doo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com