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Lord of my Life
I came with open eyes, my Lord
I sensed your presence drew near
Angels and I would sing, in one accord
As my shackles were loosed from fear
My pages rewritten, by The Author
You are The Lord of my life, my saviour
My Kinsman redeemer, The Lord of my future
Only you are able to fully restore
My simple life will tell a story
Of how you did save me, from me
Confused the wise, because you’re worthy
And hid from them, your beauty
I have been left here, for a time
To show the world the change in me
I pray they see it, in their lifetime
So when the Master comes, they’ll be readyWww@QuestionHome@Com
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With open eyes, my Lord
your presence drew me near
Angels,
in accord,
loosed my shackles of fear,
Rewritten, by The Author,
The Lord of my life, my savior,
My Kinsman redeemer,
The Lord, my restorer!.
Simple is my story,
You saved me, from me
As you confused the wise,
And hid from them,
your beauty
I have been here for a time
To show changes in me
I pray they see it,
So when the Master comes,
they’ll be ready
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Again, this is a poem/prayer combination!. You remind me of David in the OT!. His psalms were really prayers set to music!. They were made to be sung to the harp and the lute!. Your poems should also be sung!. They are always music!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You write beautifully!. Sending you e-mail with my ideas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, I like, "Amazing Grace" Keep the faith!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is bueatiful, keep the faith, God bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes the Lord did set us free!. Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com