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The Three of Me by TD Euwaite One wants to play the hand dealt, the others crave opportunity!. One thinks he’s finished, the others play on!. One is not all three, One is!. One will never be!. One is in the mirror One is in my mind One is a lonely and frightened child… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Bro!. i write songs and poems all the time!. but no matter what anyone says just keep writing!.!.!.its a great thing to empty ur soul on a peice of paper isnt it!? just wanna say: dont ask for opinions!.!. and that if anyone asks who youre writing to or for, say "me"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com One is in the water, the other looks in One shimmers like the sun, the other is still One cries, the other watches One knows the answer, The other is less real One dives in, the other waits, and waits and waits One is in my cup One I just made up One is a brave and strong child named TD EuwaiteWww@QuestionHome@Com When you look into the mirror,and your face you do not see, Then is the time to follow he who leadith thee!. There is only one Tomorrow,and Yesterday has gone, Dwell not on the past for life it must go on!. The light that turns to darkness is never far away, If you have Faith within yourself,You'll Find That Bright New Day!Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful, and very serious!.!.!.I'm certain I miss many of your serious poems!.!.!.but this is refreshing!. The last stanza sends chills up my spine!.!.!.the elipsis affect I'm sure!. Wow!.!.!.I'm pretty much speechless at this juncture!. That makes you a miracle worker, in case you're wondering!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem, like, do I!? Yes!. Not to sound like someone just trying to get points and giving the typical "omg that was so aweosme" thing I really did like it!. Though I think my therapist mom could use it for her multi-personality clients!. HahaWww@QuestionHome@Com You do have your good moments, and this is one of them!. I think they are coming more often lately!. This is in the category of one-size-fits-all!. Each one of us may have different "ones!." That's why this work is so rich with possibilities!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree!. One is me, one who I want others to see and then the child!. Such a needy child is he!. Edit--the trinity yes, holy no!. At least me!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it!. It reminds me of a White Stripes song, 300 MPH Torrential Outpour Blues "well there's 3 people in the mirror and one of thems got to be you"Www@QuestionHome@Com I love the last two stanzas especially!. They could be a poem all on their own too!. "One will never be"!. Now, why do I like this line!.!.!. Good night! Time to sleep for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Brilliant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Trizophrenic! Join the club!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Who am I and what's to be, What should I do , oh dearie me, Life decisions never end, no such thing as retiring on earth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com So you're the holy trinity!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I really liked it!. It's a good poem about decisions and dreams!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it, interesting, look at my question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like all three of your poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com kinda boring srry!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it:) keep writing!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Bridge sucks!.!.!.I must go now, something's making noise in the wall!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |