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Question: Do you all ever feel like this after writing !?
Temporal Rain
To write a synopsis of the synapses
To catch it all with no lapses
Every thought translated to word
A task that seems quite absurd
Ideas and thoughts that pass in a flash
Some destined for life the others for trash
Sorting them out with great discretion
Some words of wisdom others confession
Once on paper they can’t be erased
Maybe misunderstood but never replaced
There exposed for all to read
Pages fulfilled as I bleed
Some may look and see perfection
I always see room for correction
A phrase missed a thought neglected
Did my words hit where they were directed
The only way to know if it’s true
Is if my words have affected you
If they made you stop and pause
My soul was bared for a just cause
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Waw!.!.!.this is great!!! this poem is highly musical, i can feel the beating rhythm here !.!.!. and to tell u the truth ,
ur words have highly affected me
and that is why very much exited i might be
i couldn't just read and pass-by
such brilliant thoughts, such a mind so high
without saluting or saying HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIWww@QuestionHome@Com
Okay I ended up like rapping this in my head, but even though I don't write poetry I do agree with the sentiment!. I'll work and work on a piece of fiction and I think I've created some great enlightening piece that will just open everyone's eyes and I'll post it and lo and behold--no one reads it!. I write some fluff that I can do in my sleep and don't even care and it's the greatest thing they ever read!. Sometimes I wonder!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes I have!. But then you look at it and think, this is what I wrote, my own thoughts, my own creation!. And then I see it as a gift!. You have a very unique rhyming style!. I love how the words flow together and keep on the same topic!. its kind of like a monologue!. It's starts out with doubtful emotion that gets suddenly turns into a peaceful, confident emotion!. Your writing is beautiful =] Keep at it and good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, I certainly relate to this!. I haven't been writing for very long, so I find myself questioning my work a lot!. That's why I love posting here, I get feedback from a lot of other great writers!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really like this!. I think all real writers feel this way!. Anyone who writes something and does think it needs editing isn't a writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
YES, please look at my poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com