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Position:Home>Poetry> All this form and structure makes me tired. I like to just let the words be themQuestion: All this form and structure makes me tired!. I like to just let the words be themselves, no!? *****
Walk on the sand, on the very same land, Where Khufu (called Cheops) built pyramids!. Your feet touch the sun-baked dunes and Egypt is revealed to you!. The Nile, blue and white grows the grain that feeds the goats and fills the bellies of children born four thousand years ago… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: YES! And as I walk, I'll sing a Bangles song!. So long ago, four millennia and the desert is largely unchanged!. Who will be here on Earth in 4,000 years!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Form and structure makes me tired too, but I love the challenge of it!. Anyhow, word should be themselves whether used with a "Template" or freely flowing!. I very much enjoy free form poetry just as much as structured and this is an excellent example of a well written free form poem with exceptional imagery!. I saw myself standing on the "sun-baked dunes"Www@QuestionHome@Com some of us are actually tone deaf ( hearing impaired) so the written world and the oral or auditory world do not have to be in agreement!. I am with you !Www@QuestionHome@Com you really do have ancient thinking ppl in you!. pretty cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, what did you name it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |