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Question: I wrote a Poem about my Crush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
Is it good!?
he is the reason
you put on extra lip gloss
the kind of guy
who makes you feel like your so lost
he lights your fire
like you drank a glass of hot sauce
He ignites your soul without warning,
Hes the reason you get up in the morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's not a poem- it's more like a couple of sentences separated by skipping lines!. Honestly, it's very dull and not at all artistic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love this line
"he lights your fire
like you drank a glass of hot sauce"
lol that must be one hot fire!!
its a very awesome line to a very awesome poem!
I like it alot 10/10!.
Others may not like it but its true and straight forward ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Drinking hot sauce is unpleasant so maybe you should find another analogy!. also, in the fourth line it's "you're" not "your" Other than that, pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
If thats the way he makes you feel and you like it then will you be showing it to him!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
its really sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com