Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Since I've been getting good advice... here's another poem for you to he


Question: Since I've been getting good advice!.!.!. here's another poem for you to help with!?
Like time, you were always changing;
The same name on a different day!.
I had now idea our love was waning,
Until our last hour had ticked away!.
What Is became What Was,
Happy memories began to decay!.
So to put an end to my paining,
I decided to stay away!.
But the pain increased with the distance;
Every inch of the way!.
And in the battle of desire and resistance,
Out of my mind, you slipped away!.

Just when I thought it was over,
Your voice came back around!.
My eyes widened and my soul gasped,
My heart dropped to the ground!.
Frozen I was in a state unknown,
To the vocabulary of man!.
All the memories healed themselves,
As my blushed cheeks returned to tan!.
Along we move in this cycle of hurt,
To the point of almost letting go!.
And we swear to ourselves we'll be alert,
"I won't be afraid to say!.!.!. no!."Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow!. You really do have a gift, man!. I love how everything, every line just flows throughout the entire poem, it's great!. Keep writing! Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com