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Question: A few of my wishes~ come read!?
Let me be that soft morning light
of diffused amber halo
within morning dew pearls
and awaken you to the scent of
monsoon's musk

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or those rain drops

that hop down the
countless steps
on the spiralling tendrils in your hair;
into the feather wings of your lashes;
and like a kiss of moist love
open them from sleep

Let me bloom as that rain flower-
the smile on your honey wet lips
as you unravel the vagueness
in the dream of last night
where you were drenched
in the showers with me

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Oh the delights of monsoon!!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was super romantic!

I am sure anyone read might have been reminded of their partner (if they have one!)!.

I just have one word to say!.!.!.
COPYRIGHT!.

I think you might have got my point!


Cheers!

:)

ShaarzWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful, but still to many words!.
This is how i see it (ive put the extra words from your poem at the bottom)

Let me be soft morning light
of a diffused amber halo
Morning dew pearls
that awaken the scent of
monsoon's musk

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or those rain drops

that hop down
countless steps
Spiralling tendrils in your hair!.

the kiss of moist love
feather wings of your lashes;
open them from sleep

bloom as that rain flower-
on your honey wet lips
unravel the vagueness
of last nights dream
when you were drenched
in the showers with me

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Oh the delights of monsoon!!.!.!.!.!.!.

within and you to the on the into and like a Let me the smile as you in theWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow i love this poem! It's really really good and deep in meaning!. Love you, envy you lol!

Btw check out mine!.!.!.

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was Hot! Very good! I wish I could do that, what you did, God that was there are no words that could say what it is because you Used all the good words! Dam girl!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! Once again that is one of the best poems I EVER READ! That poem is full of emotions and things so deep you cannot explain! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful as always :)Www@QuestionHome@Com