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Question: Your opinions on this poem!.!?
3 by 3 is ment to express 9 months of labour!.
Mans Evolution
The seeds are sowed,
Three by three,
The chick hatches,
The seedlings now trees,
Flowers bloom, as adolescent,
Sun’s shinning,
Flood waters arising,
Rainfalls poring, down our cheeks,
A rainbow appears,
As the bird fly’s free,
Alpinist climbs the mountain side,
As the bird flies by and soars the sky,
Sunflower, petals - withered,
Wrist watch stoped,
As new offspring’s sprout,
New stars are formed,
Our galaxies expanding,
Evolution forever evolving, never ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Absolutley beautiful!. I like the way you made it the first and last line of a stanza rhyme!. in the first stanza!.
Rainfalls poring, down our cheeks,
A rainbow appears,
As the bird fly’s free,
my favorite part!.!.!.If you want more opinions than here's a online poetry community!.!.!.
Best-love-poems!.com
It's not just for love poems there are 10 categories!. Keep writing! you have talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
u r celebrating life at it's best here !.!.!.!. i like it , it gives the sensation of cheerness and eternal youth !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. a very good one , Honestly !!
it reminds me of Walt Whitman's " song of myself"
"always substance and increase, always sex,
Always a knit of identity, always distinction, always a breed of life!."
GO AHEAD and we salute u !.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Usually I can't stand poetry as I find most of it self indulgent rubbish expressed without any skill or ability!.
Unfortunately you have done nothing to change my mind!. This poem is sentimental and obvious and quite quite dull!.
Keep trying though!. The mark of a good writer is the ability to persevere with it and you will only get better with practice!. Ultimately it doesn't matter what anyone thinks of your stuff if you can work to a standard that you are happy with!.
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Ho!.!.!.hum, wake me up when it is over!.
Someone throw me a cliche please!.
no there are so many here i will just use one of these!.
Take an allegory, any allegory!.!.!.!.!.!. and make the semblance of something bordering on a poem , or a poem almost ran
They sprouted sheit like this in the sixties and it meant nothing then!.!.!.it sure means even less now!.
YAWN!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
hey hi
dis is vanessa
i must say dis is a wonderful poem!. not to miss-- u have an amazing imagination!. i seriously like dis poem coz it is short and crisp and is just wonderful
so it's my advice keep on writing such lovely poems!.(u'll surely succeed)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ok!.!.!.let's see!!I guess it's a nice poem!.Actually i can even describe ur personality through this poem:u're a hopefull guy & a little bit shy,u love adventure,ur dream is saving the world!.Is it!?Anyway,u've done well!.Good luck dude!!!Have a nice day!!See ya!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well,actually it's good but kinda long!.
You could revise the other words to make it more shorter 'coz what people think is that long poems are boring!.
so,i suggest it to be shorter!.
but it's good!.
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'Evolution forever evolving' sounds kind of ridiculous to me!. other than that it seems good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like the idea of it everythings always getting newer, bigger and better!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's pretty good, keep it up!.
;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com