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Question: Do you like my poem/song!? I call it "Piercing My Heart"!?
I refuse to hurt this way,
Remember the times u made me feel so deleted,
Nothing you could say to me would ever justify,
Now its over; and the love I had for you has died!.

Remember the times you made me feel so defeated,
Remember the times you made me feel so diseased,
Stranded out at sea so full of grief and misery,
Surrounded by the waters of your heartless treachery!.

Tomorrow is another day,
You tears mean nothing; your empty words of blasphemy,
And you deserve to pay,
Now there is nothing left to say!.

By:
Anti ChristWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its always wonderful to hear your words!.!.!.
another ten
keep singing the words off the pages of my heart
xoxo (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why is you're name anti-christ! Your ticking of us christians you little filthy emo!.

Your poem sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is good!.!.!. I give you 7/10

You need to concentrate on organising of words but of course this is good as an amateur poet!.

Keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ooh it gets me right in the gut!. More please!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey i really like that, that is a cool poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com