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Question: Do you like my song/poem I wrote in the hospital!? I call it "Attempt number 4"!?
Another sad attempt to end my life,
I should try stabbing myself to death with a knife,
I am dead inside; my heart is the only thing that is beating,
There is no use of living; I want to die!.
Can you swear on your lies,
That no one will cry at my funeral,
Hating to be alive everytime I open my eyes,
Why cant I seem to die!.
My pain, my depression, my misery,
When I die,
You will understand!.
I never got what I wanted,
I never got what I needed,
Let be take you back to where it all began,
It wont be long before I try to kill myself again!.
By:
Anti ChristWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this isnt really a poem, its an outpour of deep deep emotion!. i think you need to show this to a doctor, therapist, pshychiatrist for them to understand the true extent of your depression!. Continue writing if you find it therapeutic, i know i do/did, but please let people help you!. i wish you well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Awesome poem/song, I think a lot of people will be able to relate to your writing!. This isn't exactly a happy poem it's a truthful poem and I think that's incredible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good!. Deep, meaningful and full of expression!. Have you put it to music yet!? I would like to hear it when you do; stick it on youtube so I can have a listen and thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
another 10
its time to open your eyes and realize that life is beautiful
xoxoWww@QuestionHome@Com
You need help maybe if you quit trying to be the anti christ you wouldn't be so miserable!. Pray to Jesus ChristWww@QuestionHome@Com