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Question: I would like your opinum on this poem!.!.!.!?
*****
Is Nothing Sacred!?

Open your books!.
Let’s begin…
Here at the Church of the N,
Nothing is said,
from beginning to end,
…and long lists of Nothing are read,
Again

At the alter we
Friends of the N,
Old gray men,
Reaching N!.
Praying for Nothing,
prayed again,
…Nothing is sacred,
Amen

Sing along!.
Sing the long, slow songs!.
Hear the words
of Nothing,
Here, in the end,
remembering N,
…Rejoicing in Nothing,
join N!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I don't give opium; I sell it!. Thank you!.

I thought I had already read this!. Re-write!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

opinum: is mine alone!. I give credit to N
for my answer!.
I have N to offer
which can be taken
as Not helpfull
but
I do have an opinum
!.!.!.it happened after the last oral extraction!. I must wait a while to get the gap filled, the hole replaced!. right now it is a huge nothing!.!. an opinum!. a front one too!.!.!.!.!. ghastly freakin nuthin!

Your Church of N sounds like it might fill my sardonic soul!. (The temptation here was almost too much!. )Www@QuestionHome@Com

reading the frst 2 stanzas one feels, this poem is about N-ihilistic philosophy!. u seem to be N-auseated amongst 'old gray men' in the first two stanzas n rejoicing in the last one!. it's an ok poem on the whole!. i like the music of your poem and the sound!. the end 'join N' seems almost to be a military order after a free, musical poem and makes one go back to see why and how to join N!.
i wud like u to rate my poem too!.
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/;_ylc=!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like i have said before, I do not like brining any sort of religeon in to poetry!. It;s just my opinum!. But, I really love your poetry, and this is a trick style to write!. I think the power in your words and the meaning behind them was well writing!. I don't really understand what it's about though!. Would you mind telling us!?

!.!.~?*RaeRae*?~!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Had you said "Nuffin'!.!.!." you could have rhymed it with Muffin!
Now that would be a tasty read!.!.!.
A pun on a bun, so to speak!.!.!.(",)
I love the ambiguity given by the dubious spelling!.!.!.alter/altar etc!.!.!.
Later,
D!

ps!. Do you know the Nuffin' man!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

opinum=
having nothing is sometimes beneficial!.
wanting something is ok too tho!.!.
but what is needed should be more important
(and being glad you didnt make it complicated!)
your poem made me think of that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome! Loved this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing, I got it!. Whatever!.

You mean "opinion," genius!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My opin u um!.
It shines like
al u min ee um

I got something for N
Notes on sacred alters
Crumpled, wrinkled, unread!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It makes me want to convert to the Church of the N!. But don't tell the rabi!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gotta side with the Irish guy, and hope he knows how to light the opinum pipe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing is in fact everything!. I found deep meaning in these words!.!.!.!.Just my opinum!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Opinum!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Isn't that illegal !?!?!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just came for the drugs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sleeping in church while getting credits for attending!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It has a nice flow, But I'm not much of a poem person so I probably couldn't help you much :(
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A long Converb; it is fire in a bottle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

whats a opinum!?Www@QuestionHome@Com