Have you any suggestions for a title to this poem about my wife?

Question: Have you any suggestions for a title to this poem about my wife!?

As your hair unfurls
like the peacock full in plume
your eyes begin to close,
no longer in the room
the consciousness at rest…
while I take the time to view
the wonder and the beauty
of one as such as you

Your lips through which your breathing
bring imagery to the mind
of sweet intoxication
that we share from time to time

Your aroma makes it hard
like potions made for love
can’t bear to be without it
like some mind controlling drug

the essence of your aura
it blends with what is mine
two united people
made one that tests the time

the minute you awake
I will be the one you see
quietly giving thanks
for the life you’ve given me

Silver Tongue

(Geoffrey Brett ? 16/06/08)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hello ((((((( Silver Tongue )))))))

How about "One Such As You"

She is a very lucky woman and the way you wrote about your wife!.!.You are a very lucky man!.!. :)

To find and have such a ~Love~ as yours, is very precious and rare indeed!.!. :)

In Jesus Most Precious Name!.!.
With ~Love~ your "Friend" In Christ!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

considering "Ma-Ho!" as out of the question y dont u just title it with your wifes initial!.

!.!.!.unless her firstname is Bea!.!.!.!.!. then that screws my idea up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

True love is never cheesy, it is beautiful!. The poem is beautiful btw!. Thanks for sharing!.

Gentle PerfectionWww@QuestionHome@Com

How about your wifes name! I found the last 2 sentences disturbing! giving thanks to the life you've given me, sounds as though you are referring to your mother!Www@QuestionHome@Com

When You Entered My Life

I can't think of any good ones because the ideas have already been taken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

how about sweet intoxication!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

the muse of a hopeless romantic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

" And There You Were"

BTW- Very nice!. I have been there looking in before and it is quite hypnotic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My WifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

pass the bucket!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mrs Brett, My Wife,Www@QuestionHome@Com

The makings of you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice Goeff,

Timothy

:o)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it very much!. I would entitle it: My Rhona!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

''one such as you''
what a lovely ode to the one you lovexWww@QuestionHome@Com

To the one I loveWww@QuestionHome@Com