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Thoughts of you are constant damnations!.
Reaping sorrow and horrid temptations!.
The sight of you in pictures eats me alive!.
Leaves a hole in my heart, where you once thrived!.
Adventureous attempts to daringly get through!.!.!.!.!.
Only seem to make me realize how much i miss you!.
Giving up never seems to work very much!.
Who am I without your touch!?
Who's supposed to be there for me now!?
You're happy, One question!.!.!.!.!.How!?
You were everything in my eyes!.
And to see you with her is still quite a surprise!.
One person vanished, and my life forever changed!.
Confused, Disoriented, my world's been rearranged!.
This is a disease!.!.!.bound to send me to the Great Above!.
Because a simply lustful infection!.!.!.!.!.turned into Love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I knw nothing about poems!. So wat can I say mmmm its niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
really deep and loove the last line!. i like the alternating rhyme too!. Give it a cool title and sign your name and im sure you could get it published :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
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very very good!.
I love how you coordinated it, and in the end it all comes together
I also love it because I'm going through the same thingWww@QuestionHome@Com
very good, very good!. i liked the comparison between love and a disease!. very true!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
lovelyWww@QuestionHome@Com
omg thats amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The best poetry comes from the heart, like this does!.!.!. keep the truthWww@QuestionHome@Com
its good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com